Comments on: Obama Transit Runs Over Caldera http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/2009/05/08/obama-transit-runs-over-caldera/ Wed, 02 Mar 2011 15:16:07 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3 By: Laer http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/2009/05/08/obama-transit-runs-over-caldera/comment-page-1/#comment-2951 Laer Sat, 09 May 2009 16:42:16 +0000 http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/?p=6747#comment-2951 <p>Larry - Thanks for the edit. We all need editors, but blogging, by and large, is a craft that does not use editors, much to the detriment of good usage.<br /><br />That said, you need an editor as well.  Your edit should read, “…shows Obama is unforgiving and eager to cover things up.”  Or better yet, "cover up things."  I like having my verbs snuggly together.</p> Larry – Thanks for the edit. We all need editors, but blogging, by and large, is a craft that does not use editors, much to the detriment of good usage.

That said, you need an editor as well.  Your edit should read, “…shows Obama is unforgiving and eager to cover things up.”  Or better yet, “cover up things.”  I like having my verbs snuggly together.

]]> By: new orleans personal trainer http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/2009/05/08/obama-transit-runs-over-caldera/comment-page-1/#comment-2944 new orleans personal trainer Fri, 08 May 2009 22:16:48 +0000 http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/?p=6747#comment-2944 He threw his grandma under the bus, why not throw Louis Caldera under the bus a well. He threw his grandma under the bus, why not throw Louis Caldera under the bus a well.

]]> By: Larry Sheldon http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/2009/05/08/obama-transit-runs-over-caldera/comment-page-1/#comment-2943 Larry Sheldon Fri, 08 May 2009 22:05:07 +0000 http://www.cheatseekingmissiles.com/?p=6747#comment-2943 <em>"...makes Obama look unforgiving and eager to cover things up."</em>   You need an editor.  That should read "...shows that Obama is unforgiving and eager to cover things up."   “…makes Obama look unforgiving and eager to cover things up.”
 
You need an editor.  That should read “…shows that Obama is unforgiving and eager to cover things up.”
 

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